Dear Mr. Bobber:

I regret to learn from your letter of June 10 that you find our pricestoo high. We do our best to keep prices as low as possible withoutsacrificing quality, and to this end are constantly developing newmethods of manufacture.

Considering the quality of the goods offered, we do not feel that theprices quoted are at all excessive. However, bearing in mind thespecial character of your trade, we offer you a special discount of 5%on a first order for $500. This discount is made because we would liketo do business with you, however please note that this is the best wecan do to help you.

I hope this revised offer leads you to place an order.

Yours sincerely

Ä£¾ÖÇÏ´Â Bobber¾¾

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